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Jim Sweeney

Jim Sweeney
Jim Sweeney is Senior Account and Content Director at Amendola Communications.
How to keep zombie sentences from infecting your writing

How to keep zombie sentences from infecting your writing

I’ve previously warned of the dangers of writing with vampire words—those useless words and phrases that latch on to sentences and bleed them dry of meaning and vitality; bloodsuckers like “focus” and “prioritize” and “process.” In sticking with the horror theme, this...

How vampire words suck the life out of your business writing

How vampire words suck the life out of your business writing

Imagine your boss issues the following email at the end of the day: “I’m bringing in bagels tomorrow morning.” Yay, bagels! You make a mental note to skip breakfast tomorrow to make room for schmear. Then your boss emails: “I’m going to prioritize bringing in bagels...